On Writing Well

I found the first three chapters of this book very interesting, but at the same time I feel like Zinsser has just told me that everything I have ever written has been incorrect. First of all, what i did find interesting was all of the long phrases that we all use instead of the simple word which is the phrase's real meaning. "Don't inflate what needs no inflating: 'with the possible exception of' (except), 'due to the fact that' (because), 'he totally lacked the ability to (he couldn't), 'until such time as' (until), "for the purpose of' (for)" (Zinsser 15). Upon reading this part of the novel I realized that I do write with these phrases and phrases like these. It is interesting to see that sometimes the excess words are unneeded. However, I also feel that sometimes extra words provide more description and insight on what the author feels or thinks. I feel like so many people write with these supposed "unnecessary" words. If what Zinsser says is true, then how many authors have been writing in this so called wrong way all their lives? What would Zinsser calling writing of authors such as Shakespeare?

At One With Nature

This past August I went with my best friend Danielle and her family on their annual trip to Hilton Head, South Carolina. The time we spent there was one of the most fun experiences of my life and we made so many unforgettable and great memories together. However, on two of the ten days we were away we encountered severe thunderstorms. They were like nothing I had ever seen before. We were outside eating lunch and we looked up to see the ominous clouds above us moving closer and closer to the sun bringing on the inevitable storm. When it first started raining we decided to go out on the beach and play football with some of the friends we met there. At first we had a lot of fun, but then the thunder and lightning came. It got pretty dangerous so we quickly ran back to the pool area and although it was stupid, we stayed in the hot tubs underneath the trees thinking they were the tallest things around so any lightning would strike them. We eventually went back up to the hotel room and sitting on the couch we were able to look out through the huge window and watch the sky light up with lightning like nothing we had ever seen before. We saw the bolts streak across the sky and for an instant the sky turned purple. This lightning was persistent all through the night and again the next night. This experience did prevent us from going outside and enjoying the pool and ocean, but it also enlightened me to a whole new and interesting occurrence in nature.

Five Significant Facts

1. While early Americans were busy constantly trying to expand westward, new technology developed. These inventions helped new westerners with agriculture. For example: John Deere made the steel plow in Illinois, Cyrus McCormick created the mechanical reaper, Samuel F.B. Morse used the morse code on the newly discovered telegraph. Deere and McCormick's inventions were of large assistance in new settlements in prairies and specifically the Great Plains, making farming much easier on grasslands.

2. Women's rights suffered during the nineteenth century. Lowell factory girls lost benefits and sufficient wages and for therefore considered striking. Women were not even able to vote in many states. They could not make wills or file lawsuits and a woman's husband was always considered the owner of her land. However, during the 1840s and 50s there were more attempts made to regain these rights. Susan B. Anthony, Lucretia Mott and Elizabeth Cady Stanton were responsible for Seneca Falls Convention in 1848. In addition, Dorthea Dix fought for the mentally ill, Julia Ward Howe & Harriet Beecher Stowe battled against slavery, and the Grimke sisters, Lucy Stone & Sojourner Truth pushed in favor of women's rights and freed slaves.

3. With new reforms being put in place, many fantasized about their communities becoming utopias. The first of several was Brook Farm in 1841 which unfortunately failed. Three other utopias were founded in New England including Hopedale, Fruitlands, and Northampton, but they all failed as well. Not many utopias did succeed, but a few were fairly prosperous. Seven small Amana colonies near the Iowa river remain, to this day, mostly due to their profitable woolen goods.

4. Between 1840 and 1855 there was a large explosion of writing success. This prosperity came from writers such as Ralph Waldo Emerson, Henry David Thoreau who lived in a house with Emerson for two years, Nathaniel Hawthorne, Herman Melville, and Emily Dickinson.

5. Thoreau and Emerson were most well-known for being Transcendentalists, but many other writers of the era were largely influenced by Transcendental ideas. What Transcendentalism is was never easily defined because it possesses many different concepts that depend on the writer himself. Emmanuel Kant was a German philosopher who tried give the word a true definition in his Critique of Practical Reason. To Kant Transcendentalism meant "the knowledge or understanding a person gains intuitively, although it lies beyond direct physical experience". Many other philosophers, such as Plato, Pascal, and Swedenborg, came up with different ideas as to what it truly meant as well. With everyone believing different things about what the philosophy was, people did eventually come to understand that Transcendentalists were writers who focused their work on Nature and only the bright points of it; many writers such as Hawthorne and Melville thought this was too unrealistic and focussed their writing on the "area not always shimmering".

Top 10 Things that I Enjoy

1. Spending time with my friends (JJ and Danielle <33)

2. Going to the beach

3. Going on vacation anywhere/amusement parks

4. Running - spending time with the XC/Track team

5. Shopping!! - with Mom or friends

6. Watching really stupid-funny movies (aka White Chicks/Step Brothers/Zoolander)

7. Sitting down & relaxing to spend time on the computer-facebook:)

8. Spending a nice day outside tanning and reading

9. Eating - I love eating so much junk food!

10. Listening to music